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Lol the second you said "us poets," I was like well yip-dee-do let's check out this mutha. Little did I know what I'd find, you spectacular thing you. Considering that the night sky is one of my favorite things in the universe, this touched my heart because it feels exactly like what I've always wished I could explain it as. Took my breath away.
'falls on floor'
And the night sky is arguably the most romantic thing ever. Call me a giant vagina all you want, but I fall in awe of the universe when I see it through stained glass right above me.
Need some help up?
It doesn't make you a giant vagina! You see it the way it's supposed to be seen. It's a special ability, you know, not everyone has it.
You've got it as well I'd say ...
YOU JUST GOTTA BELIEVE 'throws arms in the air'
I should have been a preacher.
So how long have you been writing for?
I've been writing since I learned how to write. I dint want to sound like I'm trying to brag but its just always something I was really good at. I remember in fourth grade my teacher liked to have us write stories quite a bit (not just about our day but stories with creative prompts)... I enjoyed it so much. I was always one of the best. And if I wasn't, it fueled me to be better. It stuck with me for all the years I've been alive. I love it a lot.
What about you, sir?
I have been writing ever since. rofl. ;D
Obviously my work resembles something of a beat poet now, but the romantic influences are still there. And now I write and read poetry for the sake of writing and reading it, rather than to impress 10 year old girls.
Prettyflour here on behalf of
What a beautiful poem! I continue to be a fan a short poetry- just a few words that say a lot.
This poem has lots going for it. The way you've structured it gives it a very visual appeal. The way the words shifts to the right lends a sense of progression without even having to read it. The words themselves are simple and beautiful- you're imagery is lovely!
And I love your inspiration! Not long ago I moved out to the country and light pollution is almost nonexistent around here. I'll never forget how my daughter noticed the difference of the sky/stars. She was fascinated by how bright the stars are... so I find this poem so incredibly relatable.
So nicely done. Great work!
You're going to have to scrape me off the floor, you've flattered me into a pancake with this critique ;D